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kmotiv
Joined: Sep 08, 2004 Posts: 13 Location: Fayetteville, ar
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Posted: Wed Sep 08, 2004 3:48 pm Post subject:
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Hey all,
I just uploaded a new track that will appear on my debut lp: the abstraction agenda...
I've been spending several late nights/early mornings working out the details for this debut, and would love some feedback on the track:
It's called 'one after five'
you can download/stream it here:
http://www.kmotiv.com
Hit me back with any and all feedback, thanks folks!!
-kmotiv (aka kevin) |
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mosc
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Joined: Jan 31, 2003 Posts: 18197 Location: Durham, NC
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Posted: Wed Sep 08, 2004 4:00 pm Post subject:
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Kevin...
Your site looks very good.
The track sounds good. To me, it needs a little bit more going on to keep my interest, but I'm not the best person to give you feedback by any means - I'm into different styles.
Good luck with your project; I hope it turns out great. |
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kmotiv
Joined: Sep 08, 2004 Posts: 13 Location: Fayetteville, ar
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Posted: Sat Sep 11, 2004 9:39 pm Post subject:
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Thanks! I appreciate your feedback....
Yeah..I can hear the empty spots as well....I'm just no good at filling in the gaps.... |
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kmotiv
Joined: Sep 08, 2004 Posts: 13 Location: Fayetteville, ar
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Posted: Sat Sep 11, 2004 9:41 pm Post subject:
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weird...how did that happen? ha! |
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mosc
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Posted: Sun Sep 12, 2004 7:37 am Post subject:
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Double posts happen sometimes. We're not sure why exactly. You have to be a little patient when you hit the submit button - sometimes people push it several times. You can delete your message if nobody has replied to it yet. In this case, since I'm replying, you can't delete it so I will do it for you. |
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kmotiv
Joined: Sep 08, 2004 Posts: 13 Location: Fayetteville, ar
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Posted: Sun Sep 12, 2004 7:39 am Post subject:
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cool cool...thanks man |
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Johan Zwart
Joined: Mar 26, 2004 Posts: 496 Location: Utrecht, Netherlands
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kmotiv
Joined: Sep 08, 2004 Posts: 13 Location: Fayetteville, ar
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Posted: Wed Sep 15, 2004 3:59 am Post subject:
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Hey thats good news for me! Thanks for the compliment...
kevin
p.s. sign up for the mailing list, and I'll keep you posted on the preordering of the album.... |
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Dovdimus Prime
Joined: Jul 26, 2004 Posts: 664 Location: Bristol, UK
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Posted: Wed Sep 15, 2004 4:17 am Post subject:
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Blanomus: not trying to be cheeky or anything, but your avatar makes it look like you are recording yourself gargling!!
Do you have a secret EP of techno gargle-yodelling you can share with us???
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kmotiv
Joined: Sep 08, 2004 Posts: 13 Location: Fayetteville, ar
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Posted: Wed Sep 15, 2004 4:29 am Post subject:
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hey it kinda does! |
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Johan Zwart
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Dovdimus Prime
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Posted: Tue Sep 21, 2004 2:39 pm Post subject:
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I'm a big hip hop person and I really do think this is a cool track. Possibly like Air or someone of that nature. I agree with Mosc though about it needing just a little bit more. The guitar and flute are lovely but somehow not quite enough to hold it up for the whole 4 minutes. The synth pad thingy that comes in later partially but not completely resolves this.
The production and all that jazz is absolutely spot on, I would just suggest another part - another instrument - so that you can change things up a bit more.
Cheers
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