Give me feedback plz

spark · Joined: Mar 06, 2020 Posts: 2 Location: France

Hi evry one, first thx for looking at thos post.

I create few electro song, can you have a look and give me some advise so i can improve.

Direct link :-https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MehZS6-KXRM
-https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1mq4EGoW12E

If you don't like click on unknow Url, you can find me on youtube with this :

-Sim7 Looking forward
-Sim7 Life is celebrating

Thx for your time, comments on the video are very welcome.

spark · Joined: Mar 06, 2020 Posts: 2 Location: France

i add a new one that you listen here:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DrLzNRvTSiE

Or put Sim7 smile on google.

again thx a lot if you can give me feed back on the youtube page !

PHOBoS · Posted: Sun Mar 15, 2020 2:02 pm Post subject:

Let's see, feedback/advice,. well who am I to judge.
It's not really my kind of music but apart from that it does sound well produced and it all fits together. Smile

Basically I don't hear anything wrong with it but maybe it could use a bit more imagination. That's something
I often struggle with myself though, it's easy to get drawn to certain familiar patterns.