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My 1st electronic album - Feedback/criticisms appreciated
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irwan manap



Joined: Nov 20, 2020
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Location: Singapore

PostPosted: Fri Nov 20, 2020 7:42 am    Post subject: My 1st electronic album - Feedback/criticisms appreciated
Subject description: Sharing some electronic music
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Hello everyone! I'm new here and I just wanna share some electronic music I made during the lockdown period. Here's a quick preview of the album :

https://youtu.be/wamzYbXHoK8

Tell me what you guys think as I'm relatively new to this genre and will gladly listen to any feedback/advice/criticism. Here's more links to my music :

Spotify - https://open.spotify.com/album/4WvVaaiK01PBeF4gRjr7pS
Apple Music - https://music.apple.com/us/artist/irwan-manap/1536066402
Bandcamp - https://irwanmanap.bandcamp.com
Deezer - https://www.deezer.com/us/artist/110469672

Thanks everybody and have a good day! Razz
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TPD



Joined: Dec 16, 2020
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Location: Germany

PostPosted: Wed Dec 16, 2020 11:10 am    Post subject: Reply with quote  Mark this post and the followings unread

Hey Irwan,

very nice and easy to listen music. Dreamy and very clear.

The voice does not match in my opinion. Sometimes the vocals sound a bit too low and tired (maybe too dreamy Very Happy ). Maybe a female voice would fit better for this kind of music or you should train your voice a bit more. Wink

Keep on making your music.

Regards from Germany,

Chris
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