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The Way She Smiles (December song 2016)
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SilverBeat



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PostPosted: Mon Jan 23, 2017 12:53 pm    Post subject: The Way She Smiles (December song 2016)
Subject description: Part Electro. how is the mix
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This is my December 2016 song, I completed the final mix yesterday

The Way She Smiles - Listen at - https://www.reverbnation.com/silverbeat/song/27241835-the-way-she-smiles

I never Saw her eyes
If I would have
I would have seen through the lies
She never let me in
If she would have
She would have Thought less to sin

Chorus

I really love the way she smiles
I really need the way it makes me feel inside
I'm gonna miss the way she smiles
I'm gonna miss the things she never had to hide, the good times

So many times I tried
Tried to reach out
To a love that must of died
So tender is the pain
When you love her
And you find your loves in vain

Repeat Chorus

So many ways she delights me
So many ways she excites me
But I can't ignore the rain
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Cotarvoid



Joined: Jan 29, 2017
Posts: 12
Location: Australia

PostPosted: Sun Jan 29, 2017 9:16 pm    Post subject: Liking the Sounds! Reply with quote  Mark this post and the followings unread

Hey! You joined Electro-Music on my birthday!

I've just listened to your track, and I love the melody!

Please give my track a listen and send some advice - I love your mix and want to hear what you think of my work!

https://soundcloud.com/user-152790178/forgotten
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5Z4JFnhB8C0

Or check me out on Reverbnation: Cotarvoid

Thanks!!
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TripMX



Joined: Jun 29, 2016
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PostPosted: Mon Jan 30, 2017 7:45 am    Post subject: Reply with quote  Mark this post and the followings unread

Ahh good to see you again Terry! It's good to hear that you've finalized this song; it sounds really good!

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So many ways she delights me
So many ways she excites me
But I can't ignore the rain


"She" could also be referring to the actual song for some. Wink

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