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DP75
Joined: Apr 11, 2012 Posts: 78 Location: Italy
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Posted: Sun Oct 16, 2016 6:41 am Post subject:
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_________________ https://bit.ly/2wWR0BD Last edited by DP75 on Sat May 24, 2025 3:08 am; edited 1 time in total |
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Lucy
Joined: Mar 03, 2008 Posts: 1324 Location: Germany
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Posted: Tue Oct 18, 2016 10:37 am Post subject:
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DP75 wrote: | https://soundcloud.com/valentinobosi/monument |
I just love it. But I would put some cold cheap sounding reverb to the melodic part and fade it in and out. Also between 80 hz and 160 hz a compression and bass boost is missing. Just my perspective. Others may like it this way or hate this track. But I like this piece. It just needs a lot more finetuning. Something like a melodic detuning. The higher tones could sound very cold and the lower tones could sound very compressed and warm or dark. Play a bit more with mono and stereo and stuff. Its pretty good, but I would do a bit more changes. But its really a nice piece. Compliment. |
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TripMX

Joined: Jun 29, 2016 Posts: 296 Location: USA
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Posted: Mon Oct 24, 2016 7:34 am Post subject:
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Monument sounds really cool, it's strange, otherworldly, and has quite a bit of melodic harmony in most areas! This is indeed a good song!  _________________ I'm an aspiring artist, and I also aspire to inspire! =D |
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DP75
Joined: Apr 11, 2012 Posts: 78 Location: Italy
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Posted: Sat May 24, 2025 3:09 am Post subject:
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Lucy wrote: | DP75 wrote: | https://soundcloud.com/valentinobosi/monument |
I just love it. But I would put some cold cheap sounding reverb to the melodic part and fade it in and out. Also between 80 hz and 160 hz a compression and bass boost is missing. Just my perspective. Others may like it this way or hate this track. But I like this piece. It just needs a lot more finetuning. Something like a melodic detuning. The higher tones could sound very cold and the lower tones could sound very compressed and warm or dark. Play a bit more with mono and stereo and stuff. Its pretty good, but I would do a bit more changes. But its really a nice piece. Compliment. |
Thanks for the feedback, really appreciated. _________________ https://bit.ly/2wWR0BD |
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DP75
Joined: Apr 11, 2012 Posts: 78 Location: Italy
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Posted: Sat May 24, 2025 3:10 am Post subject:
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TripMX wrote: | Monument sounds really cool, it's strange, otherworldly, and has quite a bit of melodic harmony in most areas! This is indeed a good song!  |
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